What do you think of my poem?

“Our Misfortune”

Through our steps mistaken,

And, structures now shaken.

My Heart is still with you.

After our endless fights.

Through our sleepless nights.

My heart will stay with you.

From days filled with sorrow,

And, us feeling hollow.

I always will stay true.

With an amorous feeling.

My shell is still peeling.

My heart remains with you.

For so many reasons,

Discovered through seasons.

I always will stay true.

I love you so much,

It acts as a crutch.

And, helps me to get through.

All the fights that we’ve had.

All the days, good or bad.

My heart is still with you.

Our bond is so strong.

I hope it lasts long.

I always will love you.

I’ll pick you up when you’re down.

I’ll remove your every frown.

I am alive because of you.

My love is like a strand.

Stretching from mountains to sand.

It will always follow you.

No matter where you go.

Regardless of who you know.

My love will follow you.

From the beginning, ‘til end,

You will stay my bestfriend.

I swear i will stay true.

Now together we stand here,

Facing the world without fear.

My love belongs to you.

To hold and to cherish.

To know it won’t perish.

My heart belongs to you.

To nurture and to hold.

To still have when we’re old.

I gladly belong to you.

You’re the only girl that matters.

My heart instantly shatters,

When there’s nothing i can do.

Nothing to lift your spirit.

Even if you dont want to hear it.

I will always be here for you.

You can read more of my poetry at Myspace.com.rivalknight

this is just one stanza by the way, i cant fit the entire poem, its extremely long.