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Willeeum asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Lemme know what you think of my poem?

I’ve never felt this way before,

I need someone to Please help me.

I really crave an intervention,

But no, her name’s not Chelsea.

Her name is Caroline,

and she really drives me crazy.

I can see the love with share,

With my vision all but hazy.

I wish that i could tell her,

How much i truly care.

Or how much love is left unseen,

But quite honestly it’s there.

She is seriously amazing,

She is all i need and more.

She’s more beautiful than a sunset,

And, She’s all i can adore.

She is the only girl i see,

And, The only girl worth seeing.

I should’ve fought more early on,

But, Instead i kept on fleeing.

Away from all my fears,

And, even further from her heart.

‘Til finally it fell together,

Into a marvelous peice of art.

After such a long while,

She discovered her affection.

This made me oh so happy,

We are a picture of perfection.

With such love between us two,

We’re like a scene right from a movie.

I am nothing without my angel,

‘Cause she’s really quite a doozy.

She’s always caught my eye,

With her overwhelming beauty.

You may not quite believe me,

But really i speak so truly.

She bares a perfect smile,

Between such placid lips.

Her eyes are quite a sight,

And, Her figure could sink ships.

By distracting the captain,

As he watched her every stride.

I have so much love for her,

That i cannot keep inside.

I want to shout from the rooftops,

A confessional of my feelings.

I want to scream how much i love her.

From a spot, higher than the ceilings.

She is my one and only,

The single girl i love.

I wish her only pleasant,

Things to ever speak of.

She is the owner of my heart,

And, the girl that makes me glad.

She always leaves me breathless,

I’d never try to make her sad.

She is all that really matters,

She is all I’ll ever need.

Our love is like a tree,

That blossomed from a seed

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  • 1 decade ago
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    i like it a lot!

    Source(s): me! :D
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