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Willeeum asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

What do you think of my poem?

When we’re faced with troubles,

I hope she is not scared.

‘Cause as long as her hand’s in mine,

I know we are prepared.

Anything that’s thrown our way

We will persevere.

When times get tough, and things go bad,

Please know I will stay near.

Our love will be untainted,

Throughout every passing year.

Regardless of the challenges,

Remember I’ll be here.

She is the one worth fighting for,

She’s worth every single tear.

If they try to take her from me,

I’ll pursue her without fear.

Our love warms me,

Like a sunlit afternoon.

I’ll never stop this struggle,

Throughout every passing moon.

‘Cause our love is what I’ve longed for,

Please try not to forget.

I’d break through all the clouded skies,

For this amazing girl I’ve met.

Her smile paints a picture,

That is worth a thousand words.

Together we can fly away,

And be surrounded by the birds.

As I’ve said a hundred times,

I’ve given her my heart.

And I know deep inside my mind,

We will never be apart.

Nothing can take me from her,

I’ll be here ‘til the end.

All these girls don’t even try,

‘Cause they know they can’t contend.

She is my one and only,

Truly my dearest friend.

I hope she knows without a doubt,

That I’ll be here ‘til the end.

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    1 decade ago
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    Lady Wintress again! I love your poems so much! I'm so glad that I came across one of your poems so that I can read all of the ones that you have posted! You are an amazing poet! Every one of your poems just blow me away with the deep thought that you give it, and the amount of love that you must have for the girl that it is to. You're probably the BEST poet that I've came across here on yahoo, no lie! Your poetry is absolutely beautiful, thank you for sharing them.

  • 1 decade ago

    Hi. Very awesome poem full of life, and i like the love theme. Deep emotion, nice flowing good dialogue, sensitive, i like how the poet express his feelings to his beloved, passionate and real. You are very good with words. Keep it up. I think it's sweet and very meaningful..... Peace out you all.

    Source(s): Just my thoughts.
  • 1 decade ago

    Hm.... 9/10

    How about my question? (poem)

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=201007...

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