Lemme know what you think of my poem?

My screams sever the silence,

They fall upon deaf ears.

No one comes to help me.

You’re the only one that hears.

You hurried to my rescue.

Then drug me out of the hole.

The hole i dug for three whole years.

I nearly lost my soul.

Until you came to save me.

You sparked my life anew.

So, now i send my thanks,

For all that you’ve gone through.

Something greater than compassion,

That is what you showed me.

Not only in words, but also actions.

You calmed me down and let me see.

You brought about new meaning,

To a life that was forsaken.

I thought you’d never come to me.

But, alas i was mistaken.

Now i show my gratitude.

For all that you have done.

You made me smile once again.

Then made our two hearts one.

This is dedicated to a wonderful girl, her name is caroline o'connor. she saved me from a life of drugs and crime. as the poem states. she drug me out of my hole. i hope you guys take the time to read this. please, let me know what you think. all i ask is an opinion