Would you care to comment on this poem?

it all boils down to sowing and seeding, then reaping the harvest. Each takes place in a different season along life's time line.

Worry not about thumbs down, care not for thumbs up. I think I have acquired a skin of alligator, by now.

If the U. S. might take an internet site from the Canadians and do it the way Tommy Douglas laid out years in the past, there may well be a great gamble. although in BC the government is attempting to dismantle all that and create private for earnings the place the wealthy get richer the undesirable get poorer, the middle type disappear, and basically the rich can take care of to pay for healthcare. people are stored interior the lifeless of evening with regard to the realities of healthcare in Canada, they're lots extra effectual off than we are interior the states.

The magic of childhood, I remember it well. I'm reliving it at the moment with my grandchildren. I enjoyed your write and you were unlucky with your first 3 callers. Carry on posting

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Oh boy, you lucked out on those first three answers....

I understand this as I am locked in that childhood, have lived

that grown up life, and somehow find myself a child once more

I think it' ok. I understand the point your trying to make, but it's vague within the poem. The main point does not stick out as much as it should. Try rewording.

I can credit you with trying, you just need to add more details to the poem, so people who read it will know who/what you are talking about. use more similes and metaphors, they always help beef up a poem

Visual, nostalgic, and in modern/classical format.

mediocre

well, you haven't lost your touch!

this sings along on a pleasant journey!

♥gigs♥