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DAWN
by C.S. Scotkin
The Witness sits, reports the end of dark.
She quiet stares, her senses fill and wake
As gangly young persimmons learn to dance
In cool transmuted vaguely wintered breeze.
A crescent Moon smiles wide at Perseus
Who throws a shooting star to welcome her.
Horizons in the East become shell pink,
A silhouetted possum ambles by.
Hears morning singers, sweetly dissonant,
Keep time to ancient pulses from the Earth
Then quiet down, they hold their breaths to look
At Brightness spilling through the fronds of palms.
Small pond has gone to gold while herons fish
And carillons of men begin to play.
4 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Nice and refreshing, a lot of the writers who regularly post on here post things that you don't usually see in poetry but many who don't post cliched poetry.
So I haven't seen you around the block? I'm Aspira.
Definitely good, nice and original, I liked it!
- 1 decade ago
Yes, Sonnet Maestra, this is a fine poem. I especially like the expression, "sweetly dissonant." Fresh and new expression is hard to find, especially when we write of a universal theme.
- 1 decade ago
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I love your poem...
I like your good description and nice rhyme, hope this will be continue...
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