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To Jon Bon Jovi

I whispered to blank walls today,

There was no reply, allowing teen dreams to play.

The air conditioner hummed, as I heard you sing

Dreaming your words, your response, such the immature thing

Laid on my bed knowing you would call,

The phone did not ring, as my heart did fall

Kept you tightly in my mind, touched your beautiful face,

My hands came away empty, my foolish disgrace.

Silly thoughts of your lips kissing mine,

It was only a dream I tried to find.

Through my day in a daze, wanting the touch of your lips,

You were absent in a most gentle kiss.

Hugged my pillow to my breast, imagined you were holding me,

Could only feel my arms, you apart in your free.

Crying your name, hoping you would hear my desire,

Your did not listen, yet still fueled a fire.

I Sent my love out to you on a wind blown voice,

It returned, an echo, a sigh, though I had no other choice.

Then spent the day in wasted grief,

Our love absent, in childish beliefs.