Why does something drastic have to happen in order for there to be change?

Skinny, So sorry that you're going through problems in your life right now. You know the one person who can fix it and who can comfort you through it all, Turn to him.

Click on the link and I hope it makes you laugh =D

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Hi. I feel so bad for you. what ever the problem is, give it to the Lord in prayer, and try to calm down. This is a powerful poem i see a sense of crying out and to much pain. Things are going to get better, keep your hope and faith in God's, He will fix it. Just be still and stand. I wish you well.

this is a very popular subject matter.. and you're successfully made it your own. That is something i really love running across; better than the rest on the popular subjects.

i agree with the others in saying that the beginning and the ending are a lot stronger than the middle is, and i also feel that i should say you're greatly improved as a poet :')

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I'm sorry you have to feel like that. I've had times in my life where I've felt trapped and alone in situations. Those are the times that I feel disconnected from others and I start having suicidal thoughts. It's not a good place to be, and I wouldn't want anyone to go through that kind of thing, especially someone like you, who can create such honest and creative poetry. I hope you'll feel better.

Well it seems

that the soap opera of Yap does not take top billing in my house anymore

I am far too busy to be here that much.

This poem is an angst poem and as such It has much strength,

I think it is pretty good but as with much things written in anger it may not look as good when we calm down.

now, what to do about my sore thumb, ?

You've either advanced in your ability to write about things you're only imagining, which is the mark of a true poet, or you've advanced in your ability to get really pi**ed off and show it.

I think it starts and ends particularly strongly. The middle's not quite as powerful to me.

OK. some people don not display their potentials till they get pis-ed off. it is good.. while u r at it, try to write another poem from another point of view.

That is a torrent of anger young lady and I hear it loud and clear. Perhaps whoever has generated this write from you needs to be aware of those feelings!

Really good and I think funny I no its not meant to be funny :) it does not celebrate the power of words

but the power of women .... just as powerful as words if you no what I talking about .

GIRL POWER lol

Ever'body else 'bout said it all; if y'figger out how I can help, y'know how to get hold o' me! Otherwise, read everyone else's answers again and heed, praticularly Cassie, OW, and RB! Good advice...written and otherwise!

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