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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

An outstretched hand, will you read?

Hands are like scrapbooks, they are a testament of time...and easy to tell who owns them.

Familiar Touches

Just one outstretched hand,

That same old bony thing,

That veined and blue little hand.

Afraid if I touch it, it may disintegrate,

Into little bits of float-way dust.

Scrapbooks, time capsules.

Your novel of a tale to tell,

The lines, the brown speckles and globs

That have been painted there,

Year by year,

Day by day

Kiss by kiss

Farewell by wave.

Your written book

Bird bones that dare to break the

Film of cellophane skin.

The grip so light

The strength so forgotten

The real Nana so crumbled with

The muscle.

The independent, stubborn woman,

Now forlorn in this sad shell.

Your hand, so humbly existing.

Your hands, what I always know.

That touch of love,

That silken feel,

That bursts at the fingertips.

Yearning

Update:

Oh, I'm so glad you've all liked it so far!

Beautiful poem, btw, Texas, I like when people answer with them!

Glad you could all relate, always keep your grandmother, great-grandmother, or memories of her close. I know the one this poem refers to is one of the best women in my life, and has always been so loving. Of late, she is losing her memory to the point of forgetting where she is when she wakes up, and she just isn't the same. But her soft touch, that will always be.

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    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    The transparency of an aged woman's hands seem as though Life sanded away all but a thin film of skin. I had it in mind to write such a poem some time ago, but now that it's written, I won't. Lovely!

  • 1 decade ago

    Yowee this is so relative, thank you.

    I wanna feel good about my gram today.

    80 years those hands have toiled

    through children, and farming soil

    holding them I feel a chill

    of a life once lived as a modest thrill,

    but too still her strength projects

    she still hugs, still wants to protect

    together we hold transferring joy and fears

    both finding each stained with tears.

  • 1 decade ago

    Oh your poem took me on a trip. A nostalgic one where Great Grandma was searching for her hairpins on the table, and she couldn't see them. I saw them and also noticed her thin blue-veined hands reaching out, searching, searching. Your poem is lovely and so was the place you transported me to. Thank you

  • Lola
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    Nice poem!

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  • 1 decade ago

    beautiful

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