Yahoo Answers is shutting down on May 4th, 2021 (Eastern Time) and beginning April 20th, 2021 (Eastern Time) the Yahoo Answers website will be in read-only mode. There will be no changes to other Yahoo properties or services, or your Yahoo account. You can find more information about the Yahoo Answers shutdown and how to download your data on this help page.
Trending News
Withered Shriveled Up Shrews (Critique Please)?
Spiderwebs and dust bowls
Nebulas and black holes
Generations of remote controls
Accusations and empty souls
Kinder to the evening flame
Warmth can only ease the pain
Both love and hate and hate again
Troubled waters and rough terrain
Portals and sockets into your skull
Vibrant places, remain full
Take a step into the null
Living free to pay the toll...
3rd line from bottem should be
Vibrant places, remain ^so^ full
3 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
pretty good...with the exact rhymes you carried, toll stands out a bit
Portals and sockets into your skull
Vibrant places, remain full
Living free, caught in the pull
Take a step into the null
- Anonymous1 decade ago
i love it. change nothing, but remember to put copywrite on it. really great, whimsicle in a dark way, good for you, keep on writing.
