Brown Lamb Curls, care to take a peek and C/C?

What a great poem Poetry Writer! I love the style you've written this in and the flow to it. It's quite charming and has so much to say and leaves so much room for interpretation. I venture each reader will come up with some differing slant on the meaning. Good Job!!

I am particularly intrigued by your last stanza "they wait out their lifelong sentience wondering how their curls could have ever been made this dirty." ..........a great line that really hits home and makes one think

Thank you all for your sweet comments I read as sweet carrots, LOL

I really love this, now between this, the saying 'Are you washed in the blood of the Lamb' and 'litle lambs eat ivy' and of course 'Silence of the Lambs, I will never look at the creatures the same...

OOO lovely poem the little lamb's now I feel like having Lambs chops for Lunch mmmmmmmmm

Needs some slight editing (hair too long - bigger animals can't look). That said, I'd add that this seems the perfect metaphor for people who feel left out of the proverbial Loop. Little lambs, though, have to gain confidence that they will be accepted...because they usually are. Go boldly wherever thou treadest, Little Lambs!

The last stanza is very potent to me.

I have a hard time discussing lambs because they get eaten.

I like it, good job and keep it up.

go little lambs, go and be free, have lots of friends

This struck me as incredibly sad,

the loss of innocence,

the shame that makes us feel dirty.

this is very beautiful poem.you express your views and thoughts so nicely.i liked it very much.thanks for this good poem.