Would you care to comment on my poem?

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(something silly)


Individual loops; 
Stretched, then forced
Up then down, 
For better, for worse

Woven together
Colors entwine
Bound as one
Of perfect design

Now having purpose
To endure scorching heat
Lasting forever
My pot holder’s complete.


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the cheese whisperer · Accepted Answer

Single strands
braided together
makes a nice necklace
of string cheese and cheddar.

5 ft 7 Texas Heaven · Answer

I pretty much knew from the start, because I have one of those looms and the results were gifted so often when I was a child.

I found this delightful and thank you for sharing it.

Anonymous · Answer

I don't know much about looms, JC,
I just recall a nautical term, "Loom gale" = short-time gale.
I am glad to know about the two!!! Bravo!

Brittnay · Answer

Very cute :D it's like a wedding for the threads that make the potholder. So adorable and fitting vocabulary I like it C:

- · Answer

I WONDERED what you were crocheting (or knitting).
Using words woven together, you now have a poem
as well as a pot holder!

? · Answer

Yay!..Sweet to read JC..I had one as well
then I was given a Corker..and the rug began
How neat

Happily ever after · Answer

Aww so cute! I remembered having one of hose things! Whimsical and almost melancholy but happy and thoughtful
Love it!

. · Answer

How cute! Bought a kit for my young'un, & she makes them, too! (Some end up as baby doll accessories...)

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