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Critiques please and I need a name for this poem.Can someone help?
Old prospector
touch starved,
carved by a life lonely
courageous.
Lowly, slowly,
methodical experience
indulgent of
long expeditions
through sand, over stone ledges,
shrub and bog
diverting thought.
Seventy lonely
years with only the aching
desire for expression, for contact
for human touch
reduced to improvisation,
art on a rock,
tacit knowledge,
graffiti facet,
stone faced,
chiselled,
dreamed.
died
fossilized,
.
© pat Ramsden
3 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
L2 defines the precise phrasing that follows.
"Fossil", maybe.
Liked it.
- 1 decade ago
poetry is about self expression you seem perfectly clear in your writing. How about introspection of the prospector
- Anonymous1 decade ago
i like it.
i'd name it:
"the process of withering"
