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pat
Poetry is something I learned about very early in my life. Growing up it became a place to put my thoughts and internal conversations like having an imaginary friend.
Do you like to have fun? Do you like to laugh? Do you think this poem is funny?
well....I like to have a little fun from time to time
Poor Shot Pat
The bobcat
snaps
suddenly aware
streaks her
tawny lightening tail
up
over a traumatized
young hen
white feathers drift
dance
blood splatters
on gravel
shot embeds
in a wall of air.
cat's gone
hen's squawk'n
gun's smok'n
me? chok'n
pissed.
2 AnswersPoetry9 years agoI posted this last spring.. is it still relevant?
What about a little spring to our steps in honour of melting snow?I love limericks!
There once was a Rapper van Crinkle
Who sweet as she was, couldn't tinkle.
She cried as she tried
And she ripped her insides,
Now she's known as River van Crinkle
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoIs this poem worthy of anything?
Don’t.
I want you to come back you know,
but don’t.
I want you to laugh again and pull me in,
but don’t.
I want to feel the breath of you on my neck
and the taste of you on my tongue,
but don’t.
I want you to come back,
but don’t.
I don’t want to send you away again and I will.
3 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoCritiques please and I need a name for this poem.Can someone help?
Old prospector
touch starved,
carved by a life lonely
courageous.
Lowly, slowly,
methodical experience
indulgent of
long expeditions
through sand, over stone ledges,
shrub and bog
diverting thought.
Seventy lonely
years with only the aching
desire for expression, for contact
for human touch
reduced to improvisation,
art on a rock,
tacit knowledge,
graffiti facet,
stone faced,
chiselled,
dreamed.
died
fossilized,
.
© pat Ramsden
3 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoI am looking for critiques of this poem. Can any one tell me where the mistakes are?
Bomb
Sad
broad valley
lay
between us.
Listless, brooding
vague and misty.
Warm distant vistas
faint and fading
We leave behind
An edge of
indecision.
possibility
Snow in
morning’s eye
Ahead.
Ashes. © pat Ramsden
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat do you think of my new poem.?.?
Rock Solid Certain
A trapped dead soul glitters;
sealed carbon memory.
Hard, mute and motionless,
never again
swollen and pulsing with seething sap.
The tree, the leaf, the organic body fused.
I might weep for the mountain,
the rock, the diamond, for the idea of them
but, no, my mind and the mountain sustain each other.
My mind climbs the mountain,
stands on its summit reading the words
inscribed there by wind and rain and time.
"We are one.
I will make of you a diamond.
Look inside
and find enlightenment,
a certainty, a solid solace."
3 AnswersPoetry1 decade agodo plants and other animals depend on mankind for their existance?
I am having trouble getting an answer to this question. ..I suspect without mankind the planet would continue to support life without us... but without other animals we would cease to exist.. Plants must be pollinated and fertilized and are very dependant upon those animals for thier existance and therefore we would be without any food supply eventually. nothing depends on mankind . .. Am I wrong?
3 AnswersBiology1 decade agoWho or which is more dependant on the other? mankind or animals?
If animals, all animals were to become extinct would mankind or humanity continue to exist?
4 AnswersReligion & Spirituality1 decade agowho or which is more dependant on the other? mankind or animals?
If animals, all animals were to become extinct would mankind or humanity continue to exist or is our life dependant upon animal life?
2 AnswersBiology1 decade agowhat exactly does the term "living in Canada" mean in legal terms ? 3 months ?10 month ?12 months ?
If someone receiving government benefits was to leave the country for say six or eight months are they still considered "living in Canada" even it the time abroad is not permanent?
1 AnswerLaw & Ethics1 decade agois this poem too presumptuous or arrogant or am I being hard on myself?
“Sea of Galilee.”
Waters that cleansed the Son of Man
falls on my hand
the rhythm of the rain
flows in the blood of my veins
I am the river
I fill and feed the saltine Sea
And the infant at its mothers breast
is nourished from Galilee.
~ Patsy McAuley
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agocan someone tell me about this poem?
Farewell
earth words
I speak to you in earth words, now
but tomorrow I am not but spirit as you too will be
one day
and talk is redundant, after all is said,
for spirits only talk to spirits
and spirits have no use for words.
I will miss the us that we have never been
or been
but look forward to the sound of wind sigh we will make
upon the surface of a lake ,
the silent splendor of our sculptured hills
mountains
and the sparkle of our dew upon the our grass,
and our frost on our glass.
~ Patsy McAuley 2010 Kosrae, FSM
1 AnswerPoetry1 decade agocan someone tell me about this poem?
Farewell
Earth words
I speak to you in earth words, now
But tomorrow I am not but spirit as you too will be
one day
and talk is redundant, after all is said,
for spirits only talk to spirits
and spirits have no use for words.
I will miss the us that we have never been
or been
but look forward to the sound of wind sigh we make
upon the surface of a lake ,
the silent splendor of our sculptured hills
mountains
and the sparkle of our dew upon the grass,
and our frost on glass.
1 AnswerPoetry1 decade agoI believe this... do you? Just a little wimsical fun for the day. comments welcome?
The Thinking Toad
We strive for intellect and thoughtfulness
wisdom, brain and wit
and it's sad that some don't know the half of it.
The torment of ignorance is the lightest load.
Consider the agony of the thinking toad,
or the jersey cow?
she’d shrink in discontent,
her udder’s dry!
if she knew she feeds the criminal, the hypocrite,
she’d cry.
and…
There’d be anguish in the minds of mourning hens
if they knew and understood their chicks
deep fried for men.
that lazy house pet, dog or cat
would weep a woeful tear of two ... or laugh in great guffaws
if it considered
the importance of what men do. © pat Ramsden
1 AnswerPoetry1 decade agohow do you tell if a man is straight or gay without asking him?
this is not a trick question.. there is no punch line.. I would like to know if there are decisive indicators which would head off potential embarrassments and intentioned insults. A mans gender and sexual persuasion is his own business unless he is philandering on both sides of the street. I think.
16 AnswersLesbian, Gay, Bisexual, and Transgender1 decade agowhat about a little spring to our steps in honour of melting snow?
I love limericks!
There once was a Rapper van Crinkle
Who sweet as she was, couldn't tinkle.
She cried as she tried
And she ripped her insides,
Now she's known as River van Crinkle.
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoThis is one I would like to get advice, opinions or remarks on: it was written for children?
Laura is a sour girl from eating green limes and lemons
Linda is a sour girl from living too long with Laura
Lilly is a happy girl, she lives alone
And eats sweet corn and melons.
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoabout contemporary children's poetry, I notice there is not much of it.Does anyone know why?
I have been working with young teens for about 4 years now in developing countries and some of the stuff is pretty lame. Where can I find good examples of verse, free verse or even short poetic prose or works that will appeal to their tastes and experience ? Children's humour seems to be especially hard to find.
2 AnswersBooks & Authors1 decade agodreaming . Why do some color their dreams and others dream in grey scale? I need a biological answer .please?
and do people who do not see dream?
2 AnswersPsychology1 decade agomaybe a little fun... to lighten the mood?
I really think I don"t..
I do not like in-depth research.
Its ephemeral, meaningless, next week
And anyway …
The messenger‘s always in masquerade
They are really just a bunch of naked guys
with clothes on.
The world is all teak and tile
Scandinavian wall hangings or iron irons
Decoupage and hodgepodge
Everyone is pinning pins or gluing glue
Sanity made insane by market demands
I like leisure hours under mosquito netting ,
cats and golden retrievers
I like Jamaican grottos, warm brown beaches
Guyana, Mexico,
chickens in the kitchen and ducks
and seawalls.. Rrrrrum!
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago