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thesis statement about conservative politics and sex ed. please help?

Is this a good thesis statement? If not, how can I modify it?

Conservative politics encourage abstinence-only sex ed in public schools which creates a negative affect on the health of those students

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  • Jess
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
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    Try adding more to your thesis statement. "Conservative politics encourage abstinence-only sexual education in public school which creates a negative EFFECT (not affect) on the health of those students by ____, _____ and ______."

    The blanks are the reasons. If you have more than three reasons, that's fine. Those reasons will be the each of the topics of your body paragraphs.

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