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J C
Lv 6
J C asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

A Dallas Poem from last month, care to enjoy?

Words written by our dear friend, Dallas-

If I had a way to say with no character limits

I could spend the day in thousands of minutes

sayin thanks to all those I know

Y'all took me in, adopted me kinda and ya help me grow.

The list of those I care for could be way long

but I have expressed it sometimes pretty strong.

So many have come to my back porch musins

so many have met my family, and endured my poetic choosins.

So in this what I'm tryin to truthfully say,

I so love ya all, look forward to seein Y'all every day.

Thanks.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Again, to thank you, though not poetical

    perhaps I need to smoke some Peyote?

    You,others, me even can't just know Dallas

    to get to her core

    one has to accept and explore

    the mind that lives still in this child

    tolerate both her mild and wild.

    She is simplistic, as she lives in her state

    of sub and un consciousness of late

    Those who miss her now, may not, for long

    but what may resonate still, "her childlike song."

    You do her a great honor as others have. I thank you for that.

    I guess this did turn to amature poetry.

  • .
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Whatsamatter with you, Dallas? Git back in here & play! Nobody cares about that nonsense! Or pays it any mind! Th, J.C. You're a doll!

  • May God help this sweet caring woman. Know that u have my 100000% support Dallas.

  • 1 decade ago

    I see her fingerprints all over this. She has a great heart.

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  • 1 decade ago

    It's good.....The rhyming is flawlessly done. Perfect rhyme and perfect rhythm.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    I enjoyed this poem very much.

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