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Song to my dying father.?
The way we walk
down the wide old path
down to the open river
holds a key to this
pain we feel
and it takes away
all our wrath
I'll fill you up
A gold river pack
to quench that thirst
of yours
I'll open up
the shining window,
to fill that heart of yours
where else can I go
what else can I do
pull the blinds
up and set
on the stove
what else can I do
Do for you
the new grey hairs
upon your face
wisdom not
too old.
I'll find that
golden pearl of love
for you to hold
dust on the keys,
and tears on the strings
of this rusted
old guitar
i'll hold your hand
through it all
until the angels sing.
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Sorry for it not looking too pretty. Just wrote it. Tell me what you think.
Do you think it is good enough to sing to him?
3 Answers
- featheredLv 41 decade ago
i think it is wonderful. it has shades of w.b. yeats in it - i don`t know if that was intentional. could make for a sweet and tender song but would have to hear the melody! without doubt it`s good enough to read to him or to put on paper and have him read it himself.
- 1 decade ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ffIDL8W1QkM&feature...
i hope this helps it is a great poem by the way