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What do you think about this poem?
My Sunshine
Like a flower without water
Gandhi without food
Somehow I am less alive
When I am without you
You’re the source of all my energy
The thought behind my smile
The feeling I never thought I’d have
And have been for a while
If you ever took your love away
I don’t know what I’d do
I don’t want to live without you
pink: Thank you. I almost cut that part because I thought people wouldn't get it. Glad to see I was wrong.
Rachel: Thanks. If I was worried about someone stealing it I wouldn't post it here- good point though.
tj8: When Gandhi refused to eat it was a powerful act of love that caused him to suffer. This poem recognizes the break in spiritual energy that happens when there is major discord in a deep and meaningful relationship. I'll admit it's a stretch, which is why I considered taking it out, but creative liberties prevailed. I'm sorry if it offended you.
Teddy: Love is a drug my friend. If you get cut off, withdrawals are inevitable.
Looking for more: Thanks. Maybe you should write something like that. My guess would be that there's not as much emotion in strategy so it's more difficult to write about it. Just a thought.
Kayla: Thanks. :)
6 Answers
- Teddy BarrettLv 610 years agoFavorite Answer
Sounds like an addiction. is it drugs perhaps makes you say those things?
- 10 years ago
Gandhi without food ?
Are you referring to Mr. MK Gandhi, the father of the nation of India?
It is right here:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gandhi
I can not comment for Sonia Gandhi, or other Gandhis in existence.
>>"Like a flower without water
>>Gandhi without food"
Why don't you rephrase,
"Like a flower with no fragrance
Gandhi with no followers"
You got the idea, right ?
>>"Somehow I am less alive
>>When I am without you"
If that is about your love, forget those
suggestions, you can't bring in holy
men to just to exaggerate your earthly
sentiments.
THX
Source(s): May Gandhi help you with this.He might not take this any offense Good luck. - Anonymous10 years ago
Love is a drug indeed!
I like it...a lot.
I understand why people write about a love lost or being taken away but no one ever writes about what drove it away or how they intend to make it stay....
- Anonymous10 years ago
i love it<3
i like the Gandhi without food part(:
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- Anonymous10 years ago
omg it's so beautifulllllllll!!!!!!!!! lol i bet yah people are gonna steal it from yah!!! :O yeah but its really nice <3 well done.. if you made it ?
