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Together, a Poem for Critique?
~together~
was that a sigh
beneath your threshold
or just a mote
absently escaping
your thoughts
as they casually settled
like a plumped pillow
or favourite song
upon devotion
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No capitals or punctuation is intended
1 Answer
- 10 years agoFavorite Answer
Interesting, as are some multiple definitions for mote, and in this context I'm wondering which to apply.
For now though my sighs are mute, or perhaps moot points with only a whisper as evidence.
