Waiting for Tomorrow... (Thoughts / Comment / Critique)?

Star lights whisper in the sky

Waiting for a wish

Before they burn up, so high

Tears dampen paper souls

Butterflies and black holes

Hoping for a beautiful end

Supernovas blend into the dark

Amongst all the black, its but a spark

Just remember it and cherish it

Hope for it and wait for it

Burst into flames, and show them the light

Or burn up in atmosphere, without a fight...