critique this draft of a song?

This is written off the top of my head as a draft, so I know it's short. It's for a recently passed friend, happy birthday Mike.

Man I think of you every time I spark it

Know you’re lookin down from the sky like clark kent

I’m glad you won’t spend your life rottin in a coma

I just wish that you could’ve gotten your diploma

I’m smoking for two elevation tonight

This one’s for you a celebration of life

The good die young but your life’s not done

you should’ve had a century

now you’re living as a memory

They told us if you woke up you’d never be the same

But damn I got my hopes up guess I’m the one to blame

They told us if you woke up you’d never be the same

But damn I got my hopes up guess I’m the one to blame

life can be so unfair

I hope you’re fine up there

I’m not gonna say good bye

cause I’ll see you on the other side

To call you a great friend

would be an understatement

I’ll always remember our days spent

Chiefin growin shrooms in your basement

Always had a smile like you were blazin

The time I knew you was amazin