Does Anyone Get S.A.D?

i liked this 5 hours ago. i hope yahoo fixes these glitches. hi shirleyf.

i don't really miss summer, but would like to drag out autumn as long as possible.

I love the fall and winter! It's so beautiful, as long as the roads are nice of course. I like your poem, its very clear and well written. There are probably a few words or phrases you could leave out to bring more clarity.

"Seasonally affected

Like a leafless gloom" Is, in my opinion, the most potent line.

Be sure to keep revising and editing. I'd suggest putting it away for a while and then pull it back out.

Back to my days

That bring the sunshine

These seasonal ways

I'd never disorder

from a cloud-puffed haze

As I chase my moods

Away shortening days

Sunlight disappearing

That leafless gloom

Seasons unaffected

Nor is my mood;

As the leaves fall...

No yes no yes well sometimes , Autumn Gold when I'm wandering as lonely as a cloud through this life and past the growing seeds of Spring and now the Golden lives of evergreen the swinging gates

that lead to stony lanes ...and there the Daffodil's did Dance on nimble feet.. and the warmth of the Spring Cuckoo sings ...

my answer to your poetry that is lovely .. your good thanks

This is a new poem that I'm working on now .. I Can't get it right ( Hugss)

I think everyone does to an extent.

when I lived up North in Prince George, Anahim Lake and Kamloops I was finally told that was my problem, I was extrememly anemic as well. My thyroid off the charts at times and still... my SAD is not as BAD in Alabama

I do like your poem but the colorful trees in all their glorious array are a bit of heaven to my tired soul

I actually get more miserable in the summer. I hate bright, hot weather.

Winter and autumn are actually my favourite parts of the year.

Do you hear the grandfather clock ticking here? Nicely said, flows well and leaves room for interpretation. Congrats.

Yes, which is unfortunate because I generally like winter.

No,i don't..it shows nice cool weather is coming after heat for too many days.

Yes, most lately, and yet tryin to dispell doldrums no one needs to hear me grate on about, thank you sister. That damn hour glass never quits.