Opinions on these poems please?

1) Even Then...

Even when all the worlds decayed,

and in neat rows the dead are laid,

and among the rows lay You an I,

nobody left to mourn or cry.

Even when the tide invades,

and all that's left is the echo of a scream so afraid,

floating corpses is all that's left,

the earth is silent, not a single breath.

Even when fire burns us with fierce hatred,

and together we wait for death, breath bated,

all the trees are engulfed, the world is gone,

never again the wolfs howl, the child's laugh, the birds song.

Even at the very end.

Even then,

I will love you.

2) Nature

The eye of a hurricane.

Like an oasis in a desert,

I can hear the screams of pain,

and see the blood of people hurt,

houses crashing to the ground,

ferocious fires begin to grow,

Hell erupts from all around.

Though I'm safe, I'm all alone.

From where I stand it's eerie silent and still,

watching in horror as nature kills.