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would anyone like to rate my poem?
today is a day that won't happen again for quite some time
the number that it makes it that way is lucky they say
today at a certain time, once in the morning, once at night
you make a wish. I was told to touch something blue, too
I'll try it, but I can't say that it'll come true
if you haven't guessed, I wrote it about 11-11-11
"Did you randomly added blue to rhyme with true ?" no, my friend told me once that on 11:11 you
kiss your knees and touch something that's blue and It's something I do when I wish on 11:11 so I thought I'd add that. I don't really think it's something most people do, just something my friend said
5 Answers
- 10 years agoFavorite Answer
i like the poem overall. in the second line, i would change "the number that it makes it that way is lucky they say" to "the number it makes is lucky they say" but other than that it's really good. i like the last line especially; i dont know why, it just sounds really good. i give it a 9/10
- 10 years ago
Did you randomly added blue to rhyme with true ?? But a 9 out of 10 make it longer thoe :)
- ?Lv 410 years ago
its not bad but its nor great. i would try setting ur tone in the story a little bit mor firmly if u want it to be distinct and obvious or sumdge it out a little with a vivid descrption but leave the readers wondering.
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