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Having been denied access to this site on a mobile network more akin to nazi scum may I do my poem now?

The Tightfisted Resentment of Free Hope

The cart and horse of education and democracy

Has endangered the content of the cart

The wonderment and diversity of the opportunities

Replaced with tightfisted resentment of free hope

That capitalism is endangered in the cart and is lied to

For it does what it should for the perfection it does

May have something to do with the tightfisted resentment of free hope

If democracy is before education

The darkest future in your imagination

Maybe nothing to the past failures and past patronisations

As belittling one is the suicidal manifestation

Capitalism does not need the inquisitive cold that is deception

Nor does it fight for unmonitored validation

The opportunity of education must be free for all

And it's sleeping partners not feel the cold

"The horse is backwards, can't you see?"

"Yet again democracy."

©Nathan Eakins 2011 (as with everything else this and every year, all rights reserved)

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  • 9 years ago
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    not suprised you got denied access writing this

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    Completely unreadable.

    Capitalism will weed this one out of the pack, but poor education and democratic free choice may bring you some stragglers, said the tightfisted resentment of free hope.

    Reminds me of how my friends and I read fortune cookies. If it says "you will have a good day tomorrow" or "beware a dark stranger" we would add the words "in bed" and any fortune cookie became humorous.

    Any line, said the tightfisted resentment of free hope, sounds funnier said the tightfisted resentment of free hope, with the addition of the tightfisted resentment of free hope.

    Hilarious!

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    Oh go and have a cup of tea and a lie down.

    Then sort out your vocabulary so that your next poem actually communicates something, instead of this turgid and garbled would-be political rant.

  • 9 years ago

    Nobody said you could do the poem....

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