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Please kindly CC on this follow-up of my birthday.?

On the path which I have travelled

As time ticks and year arrives

So many have walked this path, like you and I

Happiness is always in my thoughts

While life travels on

Here I have reached another destination

With some wishes already fulfilled

And some undesirable left over

Fate may have sometimes dealt me a cruel hand

But I am still headstrong

If I have to slow down and compromise a little

To reach it in another way

I would definitely try

As this path seems safe and bright

Even though the unknown waits.

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  • 9 years ago
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    Hi. Nice sentiments expressed on your poem of life, As we all struggles on this journey the older we get , we grow with grace .Some good words choices between the stanzas.

    Your poem bring happy cheer,

    And we are each others lucky star,

    I wish upon at night',

    Friends are to each others;

    A four-leaf clover bright.

    Enjoyed your on coming Birthday.God bless.

  • Nat
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    Eloquently worded statement.

    As long as one realizes life has a way

    of changing our expectations and outlooks.

    Though it doesn't seem so at the time,

    life's "down turns" are learning experiences that

    can strengthen us. We change as we age.

    All this can add to our wisdom, or if we let it,

    embitter us.

    You seem to have good grip,

    as I've also noticed in your answers, which are

    among the best on this forum.

  • Thomas
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    Both of your poems are well executed. We have a different style, but I respect yours, especially your ability to hold and not let go from first to last, that is a special gift, even if your poem is not up to par, you garner the respect for one to complete what they started.

    I am chuckling a bit here because of your title and L10 through L 14. I finished my poem The Time Machine, and the link is below. You don't have to go there, but there is some linkage to both of our causeries in poetic style.

    Thanks

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AknCW...

  • 9 years ago

    It's pretty well written and tells me something.

    Apprehension is felt by me.but without an effort

    life is sometimes wasted.

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  • Julia
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    i have no idea what you are on about.... what is CC and what does this passage relate to? how does it relate to your birthday?

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