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Please kindly CC on this follow-up of my birthday.?
On the path which I have travelled
As time ticks and year arrives
So many have walked this path, like you and I
Happiness is always in my thoughts
While life travels on
Here I have reached another destination
With some wishes already fulfilled
And some undesirable left over
Fate may have sometimes dealt me a cruel hand
But I am still headstrong
If I have to slow down and compromise a little
To reach it in another way
I would definitely try
As this path seems safe and bright
Even though the unknown waits.
5 Answers
- RosalindaLv 79 years agoFavorite Answer
Hi. Nice sentiments expressed on your poem of life, As we all struggles on this journey the older we get , we grow with grace .Some good words choices between the stanzas.
Your poem bring happy cheer,
And we are each others lucky star,
I wish upon at night',
Friends are to each others;
A four-leaf clover bright.
Enjoyed your on coming Birthday.God bless.
- NatLv 79 years ago
Eloquently worded statement.
As long as one realizes life has a way
of changing our expectations and outlooks.
Though it doesn't seem so at the time,
life's "down turns" are learning experiences that
can strengthen us. We change as we age.
All this can add to our wisdom, or if we let it,
embitter us.
You seem to have good grip,
as I've also noticed in your answers, which are
among the best on this forum.
- ThomasLv 79 years ago
Both of your poems are well executed. We have a different style, but I respect yours, especially your ability to hold and not let go from first to last, that is a special gift, even if your poem is not up to par, you garner the respect for one to complete what they started.
I am chuckling a bit here because of your title and L10 through L 14. I finished my poem The Time Machine, and the link is below. You don't have to go there, but there is some linkage to both of our causeries in poetic style.
Thanks
- THE BANNIBAL ONELv 79 years ago
It's pretty well written and tells me something.
Apprehension is felt by me.but without an effort
life is sometimes wasted.
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- JuliaLv 79 years ago
i have no idea what you are on about.... what is CC and what does this passage relate to? how does it relate to your birthday?