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Can someone help me fix my sonnet that I wrote by myself? Just minor editing!?
So I wrote this sonnet... I really need help doing the stress marks so if anyone has suggestions or advice on how I need to fix this! I greatly appreciate it!!!
The sonnet poem is full of moldy bread crust
And how I am force to learn this sonnet form
Learning how to write this poem is a must
But at first I must go through this bad storm
On this night, I sit in bed ready to write,
Writing my quadrains with such dreadful fear.
Hoping for luck but my mind like a kite
The A-B pattern, please, please disappear
But sadly I don't have fourteen lines yet,
Almost there but so far away from my goal
I would go into large amounts of debt,
Just to finish because I want an eggroll
I finally did it, my sonnet is done,
I hardly enjoy this or had any fun
Um idk how to write this in iambic meter... So yeah... Help please?!
3 Answers
- ?Lv 59 years agoFavorite Answer
This sonnet to me is like old moldy bread
but i'm told that i must learn the form
so here i sit with a pen in my bed
this is going to be quite a bad storm
do the rest of your poem, following that rhythm. its important to read your words out loud to see how they flow.
- Anonymous9 years ago
Is this in Iambic Pentameter? Its hard to read at some parts. Lots of feminine endings, try reading it aloud a few more times.
- 9 years ago
Good luck with that! Sonnets are supposed to be in iambic pentameter. Your stresses seem to be pretty far off throughout. Bah-BUM-Bah-BUM-Bah-BUM-Bah-BUM-Bah-BUM.
I don't think your teacher is going to like this poem very much...