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The cursor kept blinking on Neil’s laptop screen. It had been more than three hours, and not a single word was typed in. He kept warming up his creativity with no result; he played some jazz CDs, read the beginning of the many books he owned, and he even splashed ice water all over his face. The frustration broke down when he heard the first sounds of human activity around the neighborhood. He checked his watch, and was not surprised to see that he had spent a full night without a minute of sleep. He let himself crumble to the clean, unused bed and took a deep breath.

Independent, prosperous, and single, Neil Green had a very comfortable life. Although his colleagues and few friends sometimes though he had to get a wife, everyone saw him as the happiest of people. Nevertheless, this misleading conception of the truth people around him created was far away from Neil’s reality. Inside his great, skilled mind he saw himself as a useless person. He opened his eyes, and got back in reality.

Resigned to see another unproductive weekend, Neil gathered some energy to get up again and turn on his multifunction coffee maker, one of the few material belongings he loved. After activating the machine, he undressed, and brushed his teeth in a poor manner. He took a shower that he felt more like punishment, than relaxation, put his Monday suit on, and had his just-brewed coffee. As every morning for the past months he had this existentialist depression, he stood there, ready for work, rethinking his life. He reviewed his wide, modern apartment, which had been almost totally financed by his first big paycheck; Most of the furniture, picked out not by him, but by his older brother, the designer; the spotless kitchen, so complete to virtually cook everything he knew, if he had any time at all; finally, he saw himself in the mirror of the small entrance hall: the tall, normal-build, and average-looking, person he was seeing was not what he pictured when he was young. He was his own disappointment. Neil rubbed his eyes in an attempt of refocusing on his vital routine, grabbed his laptop case, cellphone, keys, and got out into the outer world.