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Can you please review this poem?
This perfect pain,
This heartless hope
Enamours me
With its fire.
This smoking snow,
This damp desert
Designs me
A new desire.
This weightless war,
This silent scream
Contends me
With control.
This callous charm,
This wilting womb
Taints my
Innocent soul.
Thank you for reading this. :)
3 Answers
- 9 years agoFavorite Answer
Love your flow and how you make contradicting things make sense. Good job, but it is a little dark so not everyone may like it like I do.
- 9 years ago
This is a very elegant and comely poem! I love the "Taints my Innocent soul" Never heard of this but this is very beautiful! You did a wonderful job, get it published! :)
- 9 years ago
I like your poem. It has the same statement as Invictus, which I truly admire.
Source(s): I write poetry. I love English, speech, and stories.