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Help me with my thesis statement?

I am writing an argumentative essay for my freshman comp class, I am debating the subject of whether or not television viewing in young children causes ADHD. Do you think my thesis is clearly stated?

Television is not a contributor to the development of Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder in young children, but is the focus of falsely assumed attacks by people who need something easy to blame for the recent influx of ADHD diagnosis. Proponents for the recent influx of ADHD diagnosis in children have created an environment where it is all too convenient to place the blame on television, a staple of the American lifestyle for nearly a century.

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  • 8 years ago

    I like it, I think it's clearly stated, well at least to me.

  • 8 years ago

    sounds great

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