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Help, what can I do to improve my cover letter?

Right now, I'm an 18 year old looking for my first job. -.-

I've already written a resume after getting help from my parents. My only experience so far is volunteering, I hope they give me a chance.

Dear Hiring Manager ,

Thank you for taking the time to review my resume.

I am interested in an entry level position at Subway. I have heard that Subway is a wonderful company to work for and I hope that I can join the team.

In my experience as a volunteer in the past, I was mainly responsible for collecting and folding towels, filing cabinets, and greeting customers as they entered the front door of the YMCA. In addition, I was responsible for refilling beverages and making sure there were enough snacks out. My willingness to learn would be a definite asset to your company.

If you have questions regarding my resume or any thing else about myself please feel free to call me or email me at __________.

Again, thank you for reviewing my resume. I look forward to hearing from you in the future.

Sincerely,(my name)

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  • Anonymous
    8 years ago

    That is much too long. It repeats what should be in your resume.

    All a cover letter needs to say is which job you are applying for so that the person opening the post knows who to forward your application to.

  • 8 years ago

    You should seek professional help. Dude the other day i had my resume done for me. my friend told me about this website which does your cover letter,resume, letter of recommendation, and personal statements. They turned my resume and cover letter into a piece of art!lol having someone look over your resume professionally really help you understand why you aren't getting job offers . they're called writers workshop of america. trust me. they're amazing

    hope this helps.

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  • Anonymous
    4 years ago

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