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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

Tell me what you think about this?

Read and tell me what you think...I'll accept any creative criticism

Cold, bitter lives ways we live.

as too much, take not give

Of all the things we create

Swaths of land, we dominate

Can't save face or hold our tongue

No one cares that's the way its done

Politics promise this and that

Promises come, tip their hat.

Blind hope we follow man

Belief in GOD we all ban.

Love lost for one another

Hateful words is all we mutter.

Think not we'll ever learn

Wonder if we live to burn.

So smart, but cant think twice

End so close we'll pay the price.

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  • 8 years ago
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    Brilliant...

    I love your message in this profound poem,

    which has been portrayed vividly and with passion.

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