Two Flies in Love is beautiful. Can you improve "The Fly Whisperer," and improve upon this poem?

Hi :)

I find this to be , once again ,

another interesting read and

again , a smile on my face . .

Not to take away from your

talent , but it doesn't take

much to put a smile on my

face :D lol

I found it to be not only a simple

read ,

(simple as in understanding:P)

.. but one that showed compassion

as well as an interesting topic .

I love anything that has a good ending.

It can have a sad ending as long as

there is compassion , I'm good .

You see , I am a compassionate

person (most of the time) don't get

me wrong , I can get stupid :D

especially when it comes to bullies

or animal abuse .

Don't let the angel face fool ya lol

that's what my friends at work are

quick to tell the new comers . .

and that's a good thing , bc I"m

the first one to back someone up

that is being mistreated .

I look at myself sometimes , and

wonder ..

who am I? :) I hurt when I see someone

else hurt , I cry often over it and

sometimes

I am down for days .... (real life or TV)

it doesn't matter . You hurt , I hurt .

Then again sometimes , I get stupid

and go off ..

Who am I ? sometimes Idk

bc sometimes I fear how I will

react :P

I'd never hurt anyone or anything ,

I say that and I really feel that way ,

but I would squash a fly in a

second lol

Cute story and I find Kindly Plantice

inspirational . How strange is that ?

for me , not strange at all , for

others ,

prolly so .

I liked it . Why can't we all just

get along . . . .

@Yorkshire Man .. Mothers are so beautiful . Srry to hear ab your mother / Dementia

-New name? Doubting Thomas :)

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Thumbs up for everyone :) no worries , those that TD are just jealous ....

don't let them bother you .

Some years back I kept a Praying Mantis as a pet, and they only eat live food! Consequently, I acquired the skill of GENTLY capturing live flies in flight, or off any surface, so that I could feed my Mantis uninjured and active prey. Most moving incident was late one night when on arrival home I found my Mantis shedding its skin. I watched, enthralled, for over an hour and I shall never forget seeing my Mantis gradually extend and spread its brand new rainbow-shimmering wings. Next day I released it onto a grapevine in my garden, the same garden in which I subsequently found a swarm of very tiny, recently hatched mantids! They are the cutest little creatures you could ever imagine.

Sorry to say but my frog just swallowed one. I hope it wasn't an offspring of the couple you married.

You have opened my eyes.. another way to see the humble pest.. I could not help but cackle as i read another of your brilliant poems Bri.. Hilarious and yet insightful... It makes me think of how i once felt as a child and even now to this day, about animals.. I often imagined how they must feel and what they would say if only they could speak.. Can't say as i ever loved flies though..lol.. but now i have a different perspective on them.. If they stay outside their marriages will last here too..lol. (-:

Thomas, Here's the definition of a FIGHT---one of your flies lands on a piece of the Cheese Whisperers cheese----yeeech! Anyway, a very imaginative write(whether auto-biographical or not).I wouldn't change anything. An animal got down in the flupipe of my furnace about a month ago, and for two weeks or so I had at least 10 flies a day in my house.I had to hang up the fly paper---should I have started a kennel?--------------Good Job-------william

Much more feasible than "A Flea Circus"

Unique story, well penned into an interesting read, DT

I don't like flies, but they are a very important part of the food chain, as other animals eat them or their offspring.

Such a unique poem ( that's the truth no compliment) New idea knitted with fine threads of words. I think these poems should not be confined to the stars or comments of YA ( I hope I am wrong) and that you do share them with the world, and if you don't then I hope you give my advise a second thought :) Good luck ... a thumb down to whoever thumbs me down ^_^

And I thought I had an imagination, Yes I know I have one. Thomas! you beat the crap out of mine Bro, I'm ok with that, no! honest injun I am.

I read it once again thinking some of it might rub orf onto me. Thomas I feel an idea coming, quick write some more...lol

On a serious note T, I really didn't know what to make of it, that is when my old mum steps in and covers my a.s.s. Do you know she was eighty years old in early stages of dementia before I realized that this woman, my mother WAS A REAL FUNNY PERSON WITH A GREAT SENSE OF HUMOUR.

More of a biography then a poem.

No,I'm not a story writer,

Can not improve.

Flies alight on the nastiest piles.

Yup...nice job...byeeexxx