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william w asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

I was listening to James Bond themes,and a parody came to mind.Would you C/C pls?+thanks?

iRONSPiNE (menacing music playing)

His mind was kind, his soul was gold

But then a crash turned his heart cold

His nerve once sure, his backbone true

But what was left broke him in two

So he layed out as things went in

At four parts metal, one part skin

Just building rage right down the line

'Til he stepped off as iRONSPiNE

And every rogue state wanted bad

Well that's exactly what he had

The other fools so good, so true

Received his spine , it went right through

Today he's killing at his trade

An evil grin and verteblade

He'll have his reign if he's inclined

'Cause you can't rust an iRONSPiNE

COPYRIGHT 5-20-2013 William Weitzel. All Rights Reserved

NOTE: My brother just had back surgery, this is his nickname!

Update:

Thanks everyone for your kind wishes, he's doing very well-------william

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  • 8 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Brilliant!! Just brilliant! Am pretty certain this will go far in mending your brother's indomitable spirit which this poem effortlessly captures! Thank God for brothers like you!

  • ?
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    Gosh, I cannot stay up for the film to return out. It surely sounds more interesting than various stuff being furnished this yr. (The theme for Thunderball might work as the tune)

  • Anonymous
    8 years ago

    It is nicely and carefully composed. My best wishes for the fast and comfortable recovery of your brother's health.

  • 8 years ago

    I love it. The fact that it is your brother's nickname makes it even better. Best wishes for his speedy recovery.

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    Lv 7
    8 years ago

    I hope his kind spirit returns to him too, William.

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