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Kels
Lv 6
Kels asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

A most terrible poem, will you C/C?

It's a contract we may have never signed

the pages numerous, or not, some print

fine, illegible, but we flip or leaf through it

trying to understand the above and below

uncertainties build, come and go

and at our end time, not quite yet resigned

we whisper a plea none will hear,

a thank you of sorts,

though we have no others ear.

Life is mysterious in it's cause

and its pause

but we do the best we can

in no particular plan.

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  • 8 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    it is not really most terrible

    as it made me read it twice, I am hard on myself so get up dust yourself off - there is not a thing wrong with this poem, you can rewrite it all you want but it will still say the same thing.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    8 years ago

    It`s a perfectly FINE poem Kels.

    It communicates your meanings

    and echoes our own leanings so

    it is a `universal` of the best kind...with Love in it

    and with respect for The Mystery. I thank You.

    <3

  • ?
    Lv 5
    8 years ago

    Not sure of the format, Kels, but the content is great hugs

    and love to your family from April

  • Anonymous
    8 years ago

    I agree, it is.

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  • 8 years ago

    it's actually good.

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