What are your feelings on elopement?+C/C Please and Thanks?

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ELOPING WITH A ROPE


A rope may be the best of all
To keep you close-- to stem a fall
As soon as you are safely down
You both can reach your arms around

Although a trellis isn't bad
If it holds roses then you're had
Or if it crashes could you cope?
Just knowing that you needed rope 

Sure--- he can push and you can steer
Then start the car, drive to the pier
Get in the outboard check the choke
Ok what's next----untie the rope!

It seems you're cheap and he's a louse
But hey there's this brought from the house
A noose for two, and new found hope
That's why the one I'd choose is rope



Copyright 6-25-2013 William Weitzel. All Rights Reserved.

Thomas · Accepted Answer

william w

This is a multi-talented piece on the eight (8)

Very few snags on this as it flowed so well
and your rhyme rope hung like, well, better
not say, it hung well.

You tied (no pun intented) relationships and
hanging oneself and/or both together like a
well packaged and wrapped wedding present.

This was 'choice.'   Well done and enjoyed.
I like how you ended with hope, but depends
on what the rope is for I guess.  lol

Caz :) x · Answer

Rhymed well   their is something I don't get about the rope ,I can't imagine eloping with a rope 
 It's a little bit stringy , a noose for two reminders my of a song about Daisy .. lol 
 Nice very nice poem .... I think 

 PS  Should I be thinking .. Fifty shades of Grey ?   Or something like that ?

the cheese whisperer · Answer

Many thanks for avoiding the word "soap."
Very funny poem. I loved it.
Two people being simultaneously hanged with one rope is something I've never imagined until this moment. Try for a hat-trick next time.
;)

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