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william w asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

Is a birthmark a good or a bad thing and what does our opinion on it say about us as people?,C/C pls. Thnks?

Birth--Mark

A birthmark can be dark or light

But can't be seen in dark of night

They wait to make their mark by day

To make us wish they'd go away

So we could be like all the rest

The perfect shoe, the perfect dress

The perfect lock, the perfect key

The perfect you the perfect me

These marks remind us all of birth

Detail our death define our worth

Is it not we inside, who choose

To make that mark outside a bruise?

The evil in the heart's the flaw

That taints the beauty that God saw

When he created man on earth

And passed among us marks of birth

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Update:

Yes BTO, well said, and would those in the gallery really be considered art? Goodnight-------william

Update 2:

Caz, A rhyme for Heaven would be leaven as in leavening bread, which causes it to rise when baked and take life, as people rise to Heaven in death to begin everlasting life. Of course with 666 you're probably refering to another type of baking!--william,

Update 3:

I have three sixes on the back of my neck

So my soul won't go to Heaven

I better pick me up some smokin sticks

On that day down at Seven Eleven -- Oh, by the way three sixes adds

up to 18, and seven and eleven

adds up to 18, creepy huh?

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  • 8 years ago
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    Just as good or bad as an arm ,leg ,penis or vagina.

    Part of us as humans.Any wise remarks show no self worth.

    Those perfect belong in an art gallery.

    goodnite.

  • 8 years ago

    I have three sixes on the back of my neck my soul will not go to heaven . I can't think of a rhyming word to go with Heaven LOL ...Anyway back to you're poetry are marks of birth evil ?

    I don't no .. but it's a good question poem makes me think Evil or Good ?

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