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Kels
Lv 6
Kels asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

Will you C/C this brief resonance?

If you thought to pick a prized rose

to hold in a vase until petals fell,

scarred by it's protective thorns

perhaps you should have left it

to enjoy it's blossom in its natural season

instead of now licking the wounds.

Had you not ahead, surmised, supposed?

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    A short but nice read Kels. Hope u & D have a wonderful 4th of July Holiday (((Hugs)))

  • ?
    Lv 7
    8 years ago

    Kels

    Laconic in form, but very thought-provoking and piercing..

    I can feel the thorns and the scars they leave. Some

    heal okay, others don't.

    Well done piece of poetry

  • 8 years ago

    Good except for the last line.

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