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william w asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

Is this poem a gem or a puddingstone?-C/C-pls-thnks- suggest a title?

GEMSTONED(answer to Lapiz D gem list poem challenge)

The peridot's left off this list

But by the August sun it's kissed

With just a hint of summers gold

It's green with envy I've been told

The garnet's darker and more dense

Than ruby with her sheer expense

While one might put you in the red

They both possess that color bled

Could onyx put you back in black?

It will if monie's what you lack

Still you can step out with cool bling

If you have onyx in your ring

And what of opal with it's veins

Like colored horses' rhinestone reins

So many different tints and hues

I don't think I could ever choose

Safe jasper can be worn to guard

A shamen from a foes petard

Or ward off evil hurtful vibes

To keep a wearers drive alive

The ocean pearl's a grain of sand

That's calcified with no set plan

Inside a mollusk one will form

But perfect pearls are not the norm

Topaz starts orange but mostly yellow

And it won't bust a fem or fellow

When one is blue it has been changed

By radiation rearranged

Lapis lazuli--intense blue stone

It has a name that fits its tone

First found in the Egyptian mines

And prized by fans since ancient times

I like the emerald gem the best

And time has put it to the test

It's classy on the neck or finger

But on the ears that glint will linger

And finally diamond, queen of gems

Yet worn by hers and worn by hims

Once judged the hardest thing on earth

A bride and bridegroom know its worth

Precious gems and jewels and stones

If you want some, you're not alone

I know some rocks aren't in this write

Perhaps I'll do part two tonight

Copyright 8-5-2013 William Weitzel. All Rights Reserved.

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  • ?
    Lv 5
    8 years ago
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    This poem is one of your best. It must have taken quite a bit of research and work to write this so well.

  • Anonymous
    4 years ago

    Hmmm... * A Drunkard Directs site visitors * A city Scene, (Insert Date of Incident right here) * Injustice of the international * a guy's Downfall * The final Disturbance * habit * the international quickly Forgets * The Unconcerned * Justice and the Drunkard * The Hopeless in elementary terms some innovations off the suitable of my head. wish I helped! dazzling poem, via the way. i in my opinion like it!

  • ?
    Lv 7
    8 years ago

    `tis a tasteful and uniquely faceted brilliante pudding`gem.

    9

    (I was trying to think of`topaz` for 5 minutes William.

    Waaaaaaaa I`d like part 11? Pleasem?

    `Gemstone Emeritus`......?

    0oooops..... I`ve put myself on a strict `Goof - Limit` discipline.

    Read, `Waaaaaaaa` as `If you don't mind`...k?

  • 8 years ago

    Very well done William. Yes, the effort you put into this poem shows.

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