A Stormy Day in St. Augustine C/C?

I love your picturesque and ephemeral gift, thank you for the view of a far away place, for the things that the history books don't show are what the poet knows.

I also enjoyed the imagery in this poem Tina, particularly the bit about the rain freckling the white powder sand. A change in the weather which sounded menacing.

Riding out a storm on the beach can be fun.

Oh...you mentioned waterspouts, yep time to run!

A great personification of the rain.

Nice work.

Love the visual of this. The rain's teeth biting and freckled sand were very nice lines!

Clearest and most unique image, for me:

freckled the white powder sand

A very nice word painting. I can see and feel and even smell the day.

I was there, I felt it, saw it.

Perfect timing to read this poem,

my daughter lives in St. Augustine and she just took her firstborn off to college in Georgia today.

Maybe that rain was her tears.

Animated, well written with a

most menacing metaphor.

An exciting poem.

Gems

I loved it. Branching out are ya? You have a gift that needs

to be shared, and expanded as you have just shown us.

thank you

I thought you were in Duluth?

Cool poem.