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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

Power failures all day long C/C?

I tried to post my very first sonnet,

but the Gods of thunder pissed upon it.

I needed rewrites,

and much advice,

I tried to post it more than twice.

My typing's slow,

but I'm letting you know

in the same words as that old muscled hack,

in my best accent,"I will be back!"

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  • 8 years ago
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    I liked your explanation more than I like most sonnets, if that's any comfort. :)

  • ?
    Lv 7
    8 years ago

    Perhaps the Gods saw one or two lines

    they thought needed revision.

    Your received the gift of time.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    8 years ago

    Gems

    What the heck happened?

    I just checked...."Slipping Away" is still on the board.

    Tell me Can I post it for you. Anything, let me know

    sweetheart.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    8 years ago

    The hassles on here

    have us feel real sore

    But you can soon be back, p*sSing

    on petulant Thor;

    Just slow - gird your loins goil

    and the anti - goil churl

    Will be severely out-Polluxed

    by your twin-barrelled frolics.

    Looking fast-fwd to your return - by: `Cast-a-Good-Un, Goils!`., U.K.`

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  • 8 years ago

    You are missed when you are missed, and

    for all that goes wrong, we hold out a hand.

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