Can someone Please help me with these chains?

Here - a different chain to clasp

Love helps you ~ that I see

Yet, I`m not you, cannot quite grasp

Such pain`s enormity.

Stay linked to us ~ We`ll try to ensure

Your spirit will not fail

As this day a year ago closed one door

Thus raising a false veil.

I wish my wisdom stronger

And yours less raw yet unconcealed

Stay, you have our loyalty

No compensation ~ yet love we yield.

There`s nothing words might do to heal

That hollow left unfilled

But know that you have allies here ~

To your heart, tilled as a field.

If we might sow some solace friend

Or help you through this ~ ask ~ we'll give

For this we need each other

That you and we, linked, may continue to live.

I wish you much ~ some care`s warm touch

Amidst the memories commanding your hurt.

I`m sure I write for most of us ~

We are hearing you ~ on full alert.

I`ll send my private mail for you

Fell free to use it if it`s needed;

You are still here ~ we care about you ~

We`re friends you`ve attracted and ~ seeded.

I hope for you relinquishing

of all that cannot be changed

Mr Ripple ~ whoever you are

Come, join our hands ~ an open chain.

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May Kayte be resting in active peace. God Bless. I am so sorry friend.

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OMG I am so very sorry, but if I am correct in my assumption I have communicated that to you before. I want you to keep a hard copy of this poem somewhere so that even if all electronics are wiped out, there will be a relic for future explorers to find long after we are gone. It is so very human, mortal, and emotive, the type of poetry tat is closest to my heart. NO parent should ever outlive their child, it breaks me for a moment every time I think about it. but I have nearly 10 years of experience n grieving that allows me to say that we can make it through and even have fulfillment and hope in life again, and not feel as if moving forward is betraying the memory of the lost.

Beautiful, from your heart and you convey your pain at her loss exceptionally well. Your Kayte, I assure you, would want that you also to remember her with joy in your heart. Let's have a bit of yin/yang Mr Ripple. Your next sonnet, would you indulge me and write one telling me of the utter joy she brought you while she lived? Thank you.

As I answered you also added your additional details, so please forgive me for butting in on your first anniversary and the dedication to your daughter. You say a tear fell on every word as you wrote it and I believe you my friend. I can feel your grief this morning. Your Kayte would be proud of the work you have put into this beautiful sonnet. I pray that you can find some comfort on this day.

Mr. Ripple

This was written with passion, respect, honor, clearly a personal

ensemble of love and sorrow for a lost daughter. I cannot even

imagine the pain, can only tell you sir that she was fortunate to

have you, and you her.

Written well, a free verse per se with no set meter but a good

roll to it and a nice rhyme pattern. This is secondary.

Grief

This is a very sad poem but at the same time very beautiful statement of your heart .

Thank you .The hardest part about writing an answer is when a poem is written from someone 's heart .. And there are moments in this poem when my words are not enough .

There is too much pain expressed in this

to offer what might seem like platitudes.

It is heart, gut wrenching. The loss of a child

is far more than the loss of one last kiss.

This is worthy of every tear shed, for every young one gone too soon. The impact of this will linger for a very long time.

Heartbreaking. I'm hoping you haven't been through this kind of pain.

Each word tells of that raw, gnawing heartache that only love for a child will bring.

Except for the soulless patoot who is browbeating you (the Greek), we all share in your grief. Your sonnet was emotionally affecting.

This is a stunning poem. I cannot imagine what it would be like to lose a child, especially when the problem in soluble.

Others have responded much better than I can. I am so sorry for your loss. May you find comfort with your remaining family.