How do you like my poem?.....(10 points for best Answer)?

This is really good! Quite powerful and touching! really well done

Its diffrerent to any poems i've read on here and its really intruguing!!

You put real thought and meaning into the poem and that seems to reflect that

Well done!!

Frankly, a tad unusual and a trifle obscure! But the last two lines make up for the rest of the poem's strangeness (in meaning). Was trying to figure out the emotion you were trying to convey but that didn't come across clearly, except for the concluding lines.

Nevertheless, not a bad attempt and holds some promise I would say! Keep it going, you never know - the next one might be a real gem:-)

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Sorry friend, I could not find proper words, proper rythm, proper rhyme, proper meaning> read time and again and re write it, The use of word knife have made the poem totally useless.Line last but one and last.

I love thou like eternal life,

shall care & save thee of strife.

Similarly all the lines you can edit. Line 3,4, 5 need proper words and placement.

Thanks.

Good use of language and rhyming but what is the poem actually about? There's no real attachment for the reader because it is unclear what you "regret" and who you "love" "eternal for life"

I will fell again & so, may be

This line should have been fall again because will fell is grammatically incorrect.

Otherwise the Poem is well written and If it is your first attempt then very well tried.You must continue writing poems as you have in you instinctively.

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I liked it...very powerful and good use of language.. please read mine.. it isnt as good as yours but i write in a story style. Would mean a lot of you critiqued mine http://uk.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=201...

I Love a poem with a puzzle and a twist. Good One! Thanks