Do you like my song lyrics?

This is such a weird song. I just wrote in about 7 minutes. Someone on my fb was saying they were having a bad day and wanted to fly away like a bird. I love the Demons song by Imagine Dragons and I guess this had something to do with it. Please tell me what you think. This was very experimental for me, I just wrote whatever. I haven't written in months.

BIRDS EYE VIEW 10/27/13

VERSE

I need a birds eye view of today

Because I thought of you but my thought wouldn’t stay

I need to slow it down and rewind

Would you talk to me would you be so kind?

VERSE

It’s a like a VHS with the tape all gone

It’s like the darkest day on the darkest dawn

I know sometimes you wanna fly away

But if you listen close you’ll hear them say

CHORUS

When the wind catches your wings

You’ll forget all about these earthly things

Close your mind and open to the truth

Only then can you have a birds eye view

VERSE

Why does the room keep spinning?

How can my heart beat this fast?

Why does my future keep on ignoring my past?

I can barely stand and you want to run

My race is over before my mind is done

CHORUS

When the wind catches your wings

You’ll forget all about these earthly things

Close your mind and open to the truth

Only then can you have a birds eye view

BRIDGE

Sometimes you can’t disappear from the atmosphere

You have to face the monster and face your fears

Stand your ground in the face of death

And fight them now to your last breath

CHORUS

When the wind catches your wings

You’ll forget all about these earthly things

Close your mind and open to the truth

Only then can you have a birds eye view