Does this poem convey emotion?

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Gentle the touch of smooth brushing kisses
Softly I'll come to you, Softly  I will
Tender the night with eyes hungered wishes
Calm are the hearts beating faster still
Warm is the breath that crosses the spaces
And love is the spring of time's winding clock
Tremors from fingers that leave trailed traces
Gives patience the key that opens the lock
Lost in a moment where melding is king
Traveling in sync from rushes within
Finding paradise in flights without wings
Sacred, vulnerable rejoicing in

Time is in motion and time will standstill
Softly I'll come to you, Softly I will

5 ft 7 Texas Heaven · Accepted Answer

Of course it conveys emotion, but so much more deeply, the poem involves the  reader in them, sharing them, waking many as well as multiple senses.

Nat · Answer

One of your best, F,
for numerous, pertinent reasons.

Lapiz Dominoes. · Answer

This is so much more than an emotional poem; It stirs the spirit;-
It`s a rejoicing...I can feel it!:)
:) (:
x

Thomas · Answer

You don't waste words
Look at many of the words
you start off each sentence
with, each line starts with
emotion and carries you to
the next sentence.

southpaw · Answer

where is the title to your poem.  It really needs one.  All poems need a title.  

Also some breaks would help.  it gives the reader time to catch their  breath so to speak.

Anonymous · Answer

Very visual! I'm guessing you're a professional? ;)

Whos · Answer

i love it ! its amazing :')

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Does this poem convey emotion?

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