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Frederic

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i'm a very practical person to a point it drives some insane...including me...but in this world i figure insanity is the most sane place to be..

  • Would you cc this sonnet?

    As light dances red to horizon's end

    So do we while approaching last breath

    To complete life's arc with its final bend

    and contemplate stillness in silent death

    How quickly we flee from our past design

    Find order in reflections we ponder

    and struggle with our memory's decline

    To lose direction, begin to wander

    How fleeting our journey across its space

    Through life's brambled meadows of colored days

    With smaller shadows and vanishing trace

    We cling to days fading of lighter grays

    How slow is understanding of our plight

    How cold journey's end through darkness and light

    2 AnswersPoetry6 years ago
  • Does this title fit "Gods of Winds"?

    a sonnet from a yap from yesteryear

    To hear song birds crying as Auster weeps

    and see leaves dead, bend while carried about

    Dove wings flutter, cool Autumn sleeps

    and skies turn gray when Boreas comes out

    He'll touch all things when he finally shows

    To bring a coldness, warm suns never own

    Showing no mercy as his power grows

    To cover landscapes, to crackle and moan

    Those that are caught by Boreas chilly veil

    Will face its sheer strength, so frightful and cold

    To watch far sun move with its Winter sail

    and seek Auster's breath as seasons unfold

    I'll feel my time pass until Auster comes

    and count each day till' Boreas succumbs

    Roman Gods of wind

    Boreas- North Wind

    Auster- South Wind

    3 AnswersPoetry6 years ago
  • Does this poem have emotion "Love's Purer Path"?

    All of me, a singular gift I give

    A present given, that's without a bow

    A purest love, needing a space to live

    Becomes a shelter, when storms quickly blow

    All of you, quietly fragile, yet strong

    To know there's a place to find home, within

    A comfort when worlds collaspe and go wrong

    To seek this heart and give thanks, rejoice in

    We can not give anymore than we are

    And there's no treasure more precious or pure

    We'll place in time's chest as we travel far

    To journey this path we know is secure

    And when suns rise bringing each day that's new

    To see a silhouette of you, in the blue

    3 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem have emotion " Survivor"?

    Life's waves washed me upon your Island shore

    Tossed by rolling seas, a torn heart maroon

    You found me, the sea and sand are no more

    Gave caring love in your sheltered lagoon

    I had nothing,no jeweled treasure to share

    No diamonds bright, rubies red,fragile heart

    You clothed me in reason, a coat I wear

    For this gift, a promise, we'll never part

    My love though humble, is forever free

    I place it well without reserve or fear

    On your heart's altar, I leave a plea

    And only ask, you keep it well my dear

    Life had cast me from its brigantine decks

    Now, found survivor of my heart's shipwreck

    7 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem have emotion?

    To be in love along the rushing shore

    And feel the movement of the smoothest wave

    To kiss soft hungry lips for love and more

    Obtain our love's desire we need and crave

    It's there beneath the lighted sky I find

    Love that's found as grand as the widest view

    A splendid world warm as the waves are kind

    To wet the quiet eyes with love that's true

    And hold the tender hand to bond as one

    While watching footprints fade in pebbled sand

    And see the long red sky from setting sun

    Falling into night 'till the stars command

    We'll feel each wave upon the warmest skin

    And touch the moment until the dawn begin

    5 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Is this poem to abstract?

    As white smoke rises on black water glass

    And skies lay still on horizon's line

    I'll sit here in peace, watch the morning pass

    And seek reasoned questions for man's design

    This scene doesn't care for a tomorrow

    Nor find conflict if a storm leaves a reply

    Tranquility brings death without sorrow

    Only man has the potential to cry

    Does nature understand its own beauty?

    Is man nothing more than natures own eyes?

    Born to fulfill this singular duty

    Until the last moment of our demise

    The skies have changed on horizon's line

    Seeking reasoned questions for man's design

    5 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Is this a love poem "Somewhere"?

    Somewhere among the bending grass they lay

    To dream of days to come with gentle hearts

    And seek to fly above the clouds at play

    In hopes and wishes that these dreams impart

    Caress the face of love with captured tear

    And sense a world now found in paradise

    Forever bound by truest love sincere

    To love's altar these hearts will sacrifice

    The sun will be the witness to this day

    And hears the words they whisper to each ear

    The moon lights silhouettes as love conveys

    With glowing ambiance of shadows near

    Confessed their love as witness on this day

    Somewhere among the bending grass they lay

    2 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem have emotion?

    The lonely voice pierces the quiet night

    And speaks to no one but the saddest dark

    The stars aloft hold no comfort or delight

    They shine not for me on their journey's arc

    A face I saw fades in the tear stained sky

    As I called out for just one more minute

    Still questioning the reasons for the why

    This world is lifeless without love in it

    Disillusioned I reached out in vain

    Finding nothing but two hands trembling still

    To grasp at a cold hollow dark in pain

    And find an empty chalice I will never fill

    To hear the heart calling in quiet night

    To watch love's world scatter beyond the light

    4 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem convey its story " Questioned Reasons"?

    I searched for you in the night's dimmest light

    Found quiet loneliness stirring in dark

    The moon's passing covered by clouds in flight

    As it slowly traveled its nightly arc

    This companion listened but never heard

    The words pouring from the lips of sorrow

    And questioned reasons became unassured

    Still lost in the moon's light and tomorrow

    And what help does darkness bring that surrounds?

    When thunder rolls in distant skies alone

    And hazy eyes still are searching the ground

    In the dim scattered light the moon disowns

    To have found you before your departure

    And capture again the days in time's sand

    We looked into the stone of love's sculpture

    And found the tools marks of opposing hands

    Could I have given better understanding

    Could you have given love less demanding

    5 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem tell a story "Treachery Gone Afoul"?

    I've spilled this cold chalice of bitter wine

    And let my blood flow over chosen ground

    The blade once kind shall be slayer of mine

    My curse by the treacherous heart you found

    I'd ask forgiveness, but my soul has died

    A tortured duty for a cause composed

    And wrought with dishonor in sheath of lies

    I've betrayed your trust, My evil exposed

    This body will decay, Your life is spared

    To rule this Kingdom with a royal hand

    A cruel departure from a shield we shared

    Now lay before you, Never to command

    I call death now to extinguish my sight

    As I find in your pained eyes no delight

    3 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • What is the concern in this poem" A Friend and Healer"?

    To wander in your eyes where nothing lives

    And find the pain you keep so close to you

    The heart you have has emptiness to give

    The color of the world your in is blue

    I'll keep my thoughts and offer you a hand

    And never cross the line that does divide

    To be a healer you can understand

    I'll be within your reach and by your side

    And never fear the length of coming days

    The time within will wash away the pain

    Regrets will come and go but always stay

    If you conceal what's left of love's remains

    To wander in your eyes when you forgive

    When you finally heal your heart where love lives

    5 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem create a picture "A Morning"?

    The first light of dawn sliced the fading night

    Penetrating the forest of dead leaves

    Staining the trees in a soft yellow light

    Leaving the mind to enchantments conceived

    Fading away is the paint of dusk gray

    The sun rises with coat of flowing gold

    Melting away clouds as they try to stay

    Warming each flower so their petals unfold

    Welcoming the morning, birds on the wing

    Quietly searching for a morning's feast

    A path I will walk to hear them all sing

    In awe of Nature of which I'm the least

    To see all this life so captive in form

    To wander in light so precious so warm

    7 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem express emotion "Flames that Weep"?

    My yesterdays I have folded in time

    Then cast into flames where memories cry

    Their smoke froze in dark colored air, then climbed

    And I saw them all rise to endless sky

    Falling quiet in a pit of ashen gray

    Where poetic words will never flow again

    Lost in flames to the heartache that stays

    And buried sadness that's become a sin

    To weep long for a love's flame and desires

    To remember the smoke rising above

    And never again stand over its fire

    I'll watch every dream burn slowly away

    Within these blazing flames of yesterday

    8 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem contain a universal thought "Stored Negatives"?

    Love's moments burned in the mind sometimes fade

    They have lingered to long and now are gone

    No reason to be, or feed the charade

    False reality to be drawn upon

    And yet, some stay like an engraved tomb

    Standing monuments in the mind's eye sight

    Rearranged trophies within their own room

    Filled with memories of pain and delight

    When does the time come where they all dissolve

    Leaving nothing but a vaporous trail

    No mystery to contemplate or solve

    Nor pictures to remind that you can fail

    Can I focus the mind on tomorrow

    And release all the pictures of sorrow

    4 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem convey emotion?

    Gentle the touch of smooth brushing kisses

    Softly I'll come to you, Softly I will

    Tender the night with eyes hungered wishes

    Calm are the hearts beating faster still

    Warm is the breath that crosses the spaces

    And love is the spring of time's winding clock

    Tremors from fingers that leave trailed traces

    Gives patience the key that opens the lock

    Lost in a moment where melding is king

    Traveling in sync from rushes within

    Finding paradise in flights without wings

    Sacred, vulnerable rejoicing in

    Time is in motion and time will standstill

    Softly I'll come to you, Softly I will

    7 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem express emotion "High Tide"?

    Along feathered edges the red sun sets

    Dreams pierce the evening sky that eyes explore

    Two hearts now whisper, paradise is met

    While kisses feel warm on the sandy shore

    Sublime and time have merged to reminisce

    And white caps begin tilling pebbled sand

    A world passes the changing light is missed

    Blamed on tender touches by lover's hands

    Beneath black sky the rolling waves implore

    To share the intimate nature of love

    Feeling the presence of the waves encore

    Lay awash in awe, under the stars above

    No need to speak, eyes will not ignore

    Their fate is sealed lovers for evermore

    7 AnswersPoetry7 years ago
  • Does this poem contain anything of value to the reader?

    Looking back, I found a fool, now silent

    And as each memory plays in my mind

    I tried to hide my heart's fragile lament

    As truth is the light that can be unkind

    Time was passing and confusion was king

    To young to see, to stupid to know

    Life was a circus, I stood in its ring

    No reason was sought, nothing more to know

    I see now what I should have known then

    Pleasure turned to hel* when that's all there was

    When each day was like the last come again

    And every lover grew tired just because

    I became lost time they dispensed with

    A house of glass where reflections reveal

    Fallen monuments from memories myth

    And illusions sustained that were concealed

    What does it add up to? When old and bent

    A life lived or a life that was wasted

    To travel unpaved roads without consent

    And find the sweetest food never tasted

    Looking back, found a fool for all to see

    It was someone I've known, It was me

    7 AnswersPoetry8 years ago
  • Does this poem have a message "Empty"?

    If I could find life's reason

    It'll be buried under the dead

    No time to escape its treason

    The Earth must always be fed

    I'll give no thought of distance

    For we have traveled far

    And learned the art of resistance

    As we followed the furthest star

    The depth of our humanity

    Only as deep as the mud we'll walk

    As we argue over our insanity

    Words have no meaning, it's all talk

    We use to climb high mountains

    To see what's on the other side

    Now we search for homes with fountains

    With tall walls to hide inside

    I claim no knowledge or wisdom

    Nor understand the cause

    The day mankind succumb

    To his spirit's self-applause

    5 AnswersPoetry8 years ago
  • Does this poem convey sadness?

    The past, a memory covered in fog

    There's nothing but shadows that come and go

    A silent movie without dialogue

    A dark play, laughter and a freak show

    I have seen blackened skies with all their storms

    And touched the salt water that moves with tides

    Held trembling hands that sought to be warm

    Cried in anguish as humanity died

    I was nothing, I'll be nothing after

    In between are the fleeting tomorrows

    On farthest hills play children in laughter

    Never seeing the time that they borrow

    To be that child again, filled with wonder

    Not the bitter man life split asunder

    7 AnswersPoetry8 years ago