Is this a love poem "Somewhere"?

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Somewhere among the bending grass they lay
To dream of days to come with gentle hearts
And seek to fly above the clouds at play
In hopes and wishes that these dreams impart
Caress the face of love with captured tear
And sense a world now found in paradise
Forever bound by truest love sincere
To love's altar these hearts will sacrifice
The sun will be the witness to this day
And hears the words they whisper to each ear
The moon lights silhouettes as love conveys
With glowing ambiance of shadows near

Confessed their love as witness on this day
Somewhere among the bending grass they lay

autumlovr · Accepted Answer

It is a love poem the caliber of which I don't get to read very often, Frederic.  It's an amazing write that opens the heart and takes you into such moments of young love, untarnished with reality, that glows vibrant and pure as a whole new world is discovered in another's embrace.  Quite lovely.

Nat · Answer

You keep topping yourself, in 
the sophistication of what has become
your signature style. This inspires other writers
The elements it takes to create a musial, lyrical
work such as this is extremely diffucult and requires
a special gift.

To the reader, The poem encompasses them.
Only after reading...the poet comes to light.
Then one contemplates the tie-in
 from line to line and phrase to phrase
the essential authority, talent and inspiration 
required from the poet.
The inclusion of meter and rhyme, yet fromatted with
"Free Verse" ease
 All this is enormously difficult.
A splendid write that wasn't easy to accomplish.
(momentum  with ease and excitement).
An admirable job, Fred.

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