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Does this poem have emotion "Love's Purer Path"?
All of me, a singular gift I give
A present given, that's without a bow
A purest love, needing a space to live
Becomes a shelter, when storms quickly blow
All of you, quietly fragile, yet strong
To know there's a place to find home, within
A comfort when worlds collaspe and go wrong
To seek this heart and give thanks, rejoice in
We can not give anymore than we are
And there's no treasure more precious or pure
We'll place in time's chest as we travel far
To journey this path we know is secure
And when suns rise bringing each day that's new
To see a silhouette of you, in the blue
3 Answers
- NatLv 77 years agoFavorite Answer
This is a strong, lyrical poem
with a dogmatic adherence to a message that flows beautifully from line to line.
The "feelings" conveyed in this poem
are backed by strong conviction.
You own this poem with authority and compose
with inspiring style.
Your motif molds words, creating sculpture.
Congrats, my friend.
- DeeZire♥Lv 77 years ago
Let me say Frederic, that this is so very beautiful and loving.
I would also like to add Happy Birthday to someone who surely
has the gift of writing poetry from the heart. Excellent sonnet.
- WinterRoseLv 77 years ago
Security, faithfulness, loyality, and love. A feeling of one being cherished! Beautiful, loving poem Frederic!! I have to have a copy of it....Just gorgeous images....and deep meanings ~
