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Student in B J J class has arm broken by master. The student was pinned and trying to tap out. The student's upper arm (Humerus) was broken. The student is medium build and very fit. He is one of my students. He decided to cross train at the B J J school because he wanted to compete pro for a while. He is around 22 years old and has been training with us for several years. Has always been a good student.
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- ?Lv 77 years agoFavorite Answer
This appears to be written for a specific group who understand the terminology.
If presented to a general audience, it would unacceptable because of poor grammar and the lack of any information concerning the circumstances in which the student's humerus was broken. There is no explanation of the terms "pinned" or "tap out", or in what activity he wants to become a professional competitor. There does not appear to be any reason to include the last statement about him having been a good student, and humerus should not be capitalized. It is customary to use a full name the first time it appears, followed by the initials in brackets, e.g. B.J. Jones Secondary School (BJJ), then only the initials subsequently.