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"Love Sonnet 204" we can't help but dream, care to C/C?
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Love Sonnet 204
Across dark thresholds sleep my dormant dreams,
Inspired by aspects seen while I'm awake,
Epitome of sweetness, my love seems,
That nectar bees seek earnestly to take;
A flower bloomed from primal buds of May,
And nurtured in the sun, glazed by the light,
Which even stars at night cannot display;
I pity blooms which do not glow as bright;
But comes a time when flowers cease to be,
To be more than pleasures to the eyes,
When beauty has become mere memory,
When purpose was fulfilled with its demise;
.....When in dark thresholds lie the sleeping seeds
.....Formed in fruits, when flower to fruit proceeds.
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5 Answers
- Happy HiramLv 77 years ago
Wow. I like this a lot. My only tweak is I want a comma after "a flower"
A flower, bloomed from primal buds of May,
I was shaky on the last line but got it right on reread. Sometimes I am hypersensitive because I am not a very good reader.
Bravo.
- ttteo0328Lv 67 years ago
We can`t help but dream
A poet isn`t a mathematician
He writes with feeling or emotion
Something with art and not of science
So a coma here or there varies with the set
It is much an effect of the mind
Like a dream that we can`t help.
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